My Immortal (2/3) | Sundance Rejects

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Published 2018-08-09

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  • @zinith4524
    Not gonna lie, baiting the lead emo-goth characters using a fake My Chemical Romance concert would be pure comedy gold in a smarter story
  • "Kill him, or I shall kill him anyway" best threat ever, 10/10
  • @liaminator4950
    I love how the author spells ebonys name like 20 different ways but somehow got alzheimers right
  • @sarko5989
    Literally anyone: breathes Endbonie: i was so angry I began to cry tears of blood and slit my wrists while listening to mcr
  • I love how these characters are simultaneously suicidal and constantly begging for their life.
  • @Grim_October
    The best part is how “Mr. Noris” asked if there was anybody under the cloak. Implying that the cloak wasn’t invisible. 😂
  • @doctorth8771
    I love how in this universe there's like 15 different MCR concerts every day
  • @ratska96
    For real tho, "dog-father" instead of god-father for sirius black is legitimately a stroke of genius
  • "I'll be on vacation in transylvania ..." Translation: I have a sleep over at ravens house
  • i like how voldemort has a legitimate chance to kill vampire several times but he’s like “enoby you gotta do it”
  • @wp6192
    This fanfic should be what shown to anyone who wonders what the hell emo culture was like in the mid 2000s.
  • @mort7987
    Drink when: -A Band is Mentioned -An Outfit is described -the Authors Notes say "stop flaming" or "thanks raven"
  • @nerolemon
    imagine what this story would be like without raven
  • “You’re too old and your Alzheimer’s is dangerous” is actually a good line
  • @Eiko...
    "Black invisibility cloak" has got to be the most underrated thing in this story.
  • @PileOfStones
    You gotta admit Volseymort is very talented given that he performed at a concert without accidentally using his signature ye olde English. No wonder nobody saw it coming.
  • @3cstasy7410
    "I think he's having a midlife crisis" is truly one of the most underrated lines here because it suggests that Dumbledore lives for over 200 years.
  • @peterstoric6560
    Did the author seriously call someone a “prep” for crying when literally every main character randomly cries. Also “Vampire jumps on Draco (Not in that way you pervs)” says the person who created characters that randomly have sex nearly throughout an entire story