comic draft (feedback pls!)
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Publicado 2023-07-28
i've been working on restarting my comic Restart (lol)
original - https://www.pixilart.com/comics/thriller/restart-10248
these are a few new pages and i would really appreciate feedback on them -
is the handwritten font ok (spacing/readability/size etc)? should i try text?
should i use a clearer brush? (the one i'm using is called 'oil pen')
does the conversation flow properly?
opinions on art?
background colour??
also for ch1 pg1:
any feedback/advice for the panel with owen looking out the window would be great :D
tysm <3