Galactic Council Betrayed Humanity and Paid The Price When Our Fleet Arrived! | HFY Sci-Fi Story

Broken and disjointed. No continuity. Locations jump around. One moment they are on the bridge ( what a Torture rack is doing on the bridge I cannot say ) the next they are in the engine room.

I loved their names JACK AND BOBBY. So great.

That was Great

Great story. Keep up the good work 👍

How did Cragg get into another fight after he had died in a puddle of blood earlier?

GREAT VIDEO

Many of these scifi stories sound like they were written using AI. I am growing weary of them.

Loved the story.

Kept on jumping around

OH PUUULLLEEAASE !!!

All of this tellings i really like very much,but it should bee animated that has been King of all story..... I Am sci fi lover... SO TANX FOR ALL YOUR TELLING STORIES... GREETINGS FROM OSLO

I liked it

Great as always! I like the story!

I liked the story. Thank you.

I like the story

I really feel like the quality of the stories has been dropping. Scripts need to be run through several drafts before they get published for a reason, this one has the markings for a great story but it really felt like a standard Sci-fi movie that's forgettable. Take beginning where humanity was betrayed and their escape from the council, that alone should have been a hour story. Easily part 1 with seeing how the ambassador was struggling to get out of jamming. Part 2 would be the slow invasion by the enemy, say colony after colony getting hit, the humans are; alone until one of council members joins in. Part 3 would be the conclusion of the battle of earth plus the betrayal we saw. Then end it with the new species attack.

The ending was a let down why not have take railway cars of RAID Fumigator. LOL

A very 'young ' story, aimed at youth. Quite basic full of tropes and formulaic stereotypes. Fun enough, although frustratingly simple for a mature listener. Would be interesting to see this properly fleshed out at some point, as there's lots of potential here.

keep it coming

I loved the story.