When Galactic Empire Realizes Earth Is Off Limits | HFY | A Short Sci-Fi Story

A good story... Having much less of "The Message" than previous posts is a definite improvement ! It allows being able to listen without cringing. My only complaint is the disappointingly flat and mechanical narration. It blunted the impact of the story quite considerably. As you seem to be committed to mechanical narration, may I suggest you upgrade your program.. There is definitely better software out there than what you are currently using. Story 7/10, Narration 4.5/10

In spite of all the naysayers in the comment section, I enjoyed the story, instead of nit picking on small details. Thank you for sharing.

Good story, but PLEASE take away the blue highlighting for the words-- It's very distracting/annoying! Also having a full line of text (8-9 words) would make it easier to read. I'm often in locations where I can't have the volume turned up, so I'm reading the text more than listening.

ok must of missed a little but how does a scan tech become the leader of the fleet just because he did his job??

Thank you 💐🌺💐for all your effort & the time you put in when uploading this. It is really truly appreciated 🙏 ...the Empire will strike back (SW?) 😂 ....Federation of planets... (ST?)

Suffer not the alien to live.

I liked this. It was more a road map to a story. Less individual battles and adversities and more conclusions and results. This should be a way to map out a full story including heroes and villians. Maybe even a loyalist protagonist or 2.

Best narration of a si-fi story I’ve heard on here so far 👍 Will definitely check out some more of your episodes.

Holy adjectives batman!!!

Overly florid and it goes nowhere slowly. Short stories require a lot more brevity

part two will be, the empire strikes back

Basically super earth but no greed mixed with propaganda

Probably if like in RL there would only be a few people per ship and every thing automatic the people on board would be putting on a show that they had a bigger crew onboard 😂

Well Leo seems quite a one dimensional but multi tasking all powerfull leader super man doesn't he? lol the poor guy has to do everything himself

So on first meeting with an alien the alien broadcast a flawless audio visual broadcast and we picked it up? On what frequency? Over what means of transmission? Was their machine language even binary could our computer interfacing with there’s even begin to understand that garble was code and not noise? Yeah sure I guess they just “hail us” all ships can hail right? Just a standard aspect of all species. We use the same energy to convey data and all pick it up. What?

The entire thing is stupid, you don't reveal your defensive systems to a potential enemy, specially when they are stationary, sure they manage to see thru the stealth of that scout ship, but what if that not the best they had? You can't think you will be always able to see thru their stealth, and they have no idea what kind of weapons the "Galactic Empire" has, telling them you have satellites that "create" a "planetary shield is stupid, more so because they can't protect against everything, drop enough "rocks" on it and it will blow up together with the world, or just turn Sol in to a furnace and cook us alive, ignite Jupiter in to a second sun and we are also dead, so so many ways an advance enemy can make life death it ridiculous.

Seems like an AI story

How did human ingenuity and resolve help... It's like all these stores can't use words except these... Stop being lazy

Yes earth or should I say america defends the sol system

Mary Stu