They Laughed At "Tiny Army", Until They Realized It Had HUMAN Soldiers! | HFY Sci-Fi Story
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Published 2024-04-23
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All Comments (21)
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"..weaponized gunships.."?? It wouldn't be much of a gunship if it wasn't weaponized!
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When I see something using well-known sci-fi names like 'Bajoran' it makes me think it was the product of an AI, and that no human editor even bothered to look it over.
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They committed the crime of perfidy - false surrender. No quarter is to be given.
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Bajorans: Consider the fate of your women. Human: Clearly you don’t know our women. I should have just marched them up here judging from what I’ve seen.
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"Fenris" and "Bajoran"... good lord, the AI is strong in this one!
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Good story, sighed and facepalmed at the Star Trek name references though. Only inconsistency was at the end which involved the child's doll. The commander had given it back to the little girl and told her to go hide, then he had it back in his hand at the end ("Whoops").
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This should be the base story for a movie. No drama. Just, confidence, carnage and victory....🤔
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Great fun, but please, please get the text proof read before publishing. There are LOTS of spolling mistakes!
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That looks like Titus Pullo of the XIII Legion. I would not be messing with him.
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The only thing that gives away that an ai is writing this is when it uses the same words to describe something . The words it uses are totally correct but it cannot understand that even though those words are the best choice to describe something, we english language speakers find it off putting to use the same metaphor or turn of phrase multiple times in the same body of text. The Ai cannot understand such subtleties of writing.
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I’m old enough to know that sci-fi and Hollywood usually give us a hint of what’s to come or has already happened behind the scenes.
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Humanity is a force to be reckoned with. They have a lot of experience after all, fighting each other.
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I thought it was a movie recap. I was surprised, to find it a storyline. Very well written, written. Thank you.
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This AIs grasp of battle field tactics is woeful.
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He gave the doll back to the little girl, but he looked at it in his hand later, and other strangeness, but an engaging story.
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I’m one of those old soldiers (11B), and this story was fantastic, thank you!
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Humans didn't have ftl, but are on this planet. Soo, they lived there too? Or they spent generations just to get 1% of the way there to aid them? I don't get this, the Bajoran Capital city is only miles away from the battlefield, so they also lived on that planet with the L aliens? So much is confusing and I barely started. These vids are great as a, "what not to do" if you do a little story writing.
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I hear bajorians i star thinking star trek lmao
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Dammmm, almost felt bad for the aliens for a minute! 😂😂😂
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